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“swimmy"读后感选登——11(01)班学生优秀作品欣赏  

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上周,吴老师带领着大家学习了绘本“swimmy”,这是抽象派大师李欧·李奥尼充满理想主义色彩的杰作,带给了我们奇妙的想象和无尽的勇气。吴老师要求同学们在20分钟内做课堂作文训练,写一篇英文的读后感;课后作业是完成一篇中文的读后感。让老师感到欣喜的是,在短短的20分钟内,不少同学写出了非常优秀的读后感作品,不管是从语法角度还是文学角度,都非常的出色!下面附上绘本原文以及部分优秀作文:

                                                                           Swimmy

Written by Leo Lionni

Originally published in 1963

A happy school of little fish lived in a corner of the sea somewhere. They were all red. Only one of them was as black as mussel shell. He swam faster than his brothers and sisters. His name was Swimmy.

One bad day a tuna fish, swift, fierce and very hungry, came darting through the waves. In one gulp he swallowed all the little red fish. Only Swimmy escaped.

He swam away in the deep wet world. He was scared, lonely and very sad.
      But the sea was full of wonderful creatures, and as he swam from marvel to marvel Swimmy was happy again.
      He saw a medusa made of rainbow jelly…
      a lobster, who walked about like a water-moving machine…
      strange fish, pulled by an invisible thread…
      a forest of seaweeds growing from sugar-candy rocks…
      an eel whose tail was almost too far away to remember…
      and sea anemones, who looked like pink palm trees swaying in the wind.
      Then, hidden in the dark shade of rocks and weeds, he saw a school of little fish, just like his own.
      “Let’s go and swim and play and SEE things!” he said happily.
      “We can’t,” said the little red fish. “The big fish will eat us all.”
      “But you can’t just lie there,” said Swimmy. “We must THINK of something.”
      Swimmy thought and thought and thought.
      Then suddenly he said, “I have it! We are going to swim all together like the biggest fish in the sea!”
      He taught them to swim close together, each in his own place, and when they had learned to swim like one giant fish, he said,” I’ll be the eye.”
      And so they swam in the cool morning water and in the midday sun and chased the big fish away.

优秀读后感选登:

 

徐予唯(小学六年级):

Last week, I finished reading a wonderful picture book called “Swimmy”. It was about a little black fish named “swimmy”. He was in a happy school of little red fish. He swam faster than his brothers and sisters.

One bad day a tuna fish swallowed all the little red fish, only swimmy escaped. He swam away in the deep wet world. He was scared, lonely and very sad.

But when he saw many wonderful creatures, and as he swam from marvel to marvel Swimmy was happy again.
    Suddenly he saw a school of little fish, just like his own. Then he taught them to swim close like one giant fish. They were happy.

When I read this book, I was very happy. I think swimmy was helpful and smart. And the most important thing is that he was brave.

I will read this book again. Even though this story is short, it tells me that unity is power!

 

干咏汝(小学六年级):

Today, I finished reading a wonderful picture book called “Swimmy”. It talked about a story that a school of fish lived in a beautiful sea. They were all red, only swimmy was black. He was ugly, but he didn’t care because he swam faster than many other fish. He was very brave, and he swam from marvel to marvel.In the end, swimmy and other little fish swam all together like the biggest fish in the sea. They chased the big fish away.

I think swimmy is very intelligent. He has the courage to overcome difficulties. I should learn from him.

 

江允节(初一):

   Today, I finished reading a wonderful picture book called “Swimmy”. It was about a small black fish-- “swimmy”. He swam faster than other red fish. One day, a tuna fish swallowed all the little red fish, only swimmy escaped. He swam from marvel to marvel. And he saw a school of red fish. He was happy again. Then he taught them to swim together like a biggest fish in the sea. So they could chase the big fish every day.

I think swimmy was smart and helpful. And the red fish were united. I think we should learn their unity. And I want to read many books because “reading makes a full man”.

 

杨濠旗(小学六年级):

Last week, I finished reading an exciting picture book called “Swimmy”. It was about a small fish named “swimmy” who had a big family. He was black. His brothers and sisters were all red. One day a tuna fish swallowed all his brothers and sisters, only he escaped. Luckily, he swam from marvel to marvel and saw a school of gentle red fish. They swam all together like one giant fish and chased the big fish away.

It’s a very good story. I think all the creatures in this world have a competition. All the winners are intelligent. Maybe they swim faster, maybe they are smaller. And we should work together. In fact, if you unite, you will be more powerful. A sperm whale is about 35 tons. If they don’t unite, they will die. So we should get more and more united.

 

林意涵(初一):

   Today, I finished reading an interesting picture book called “Swimmy”. It was about a tuna fish ate a black fish’s family and then the black fish found a school of little red fish. They swam all together like the biggest fish in the sea. And next, they united and chased the big fish away. Unity is strength. And I really like this story because I think it is too exciting. I want to read more stories like “Swimmy”. They are good for us.

 

胡双木(小学六年级):

Last week, I finished reading a fantastic picture book called “Swimmy”.It was about a fish named swimmy. He swam from marvel to marvel. At first, he lived with his brothers and sisters. One day, a tuna fish swallowed all the little red fish, but swimmy escaped. Then, he found some friends. They swam all together like the biggest fish in the sea. At last, they swam in the cool morning water and in the midday sun and chased the big fish away. I think swimmy was very clever and brave. The story tells us that if you are brave and smart enough, you will make from marvel to marvel!


中文读后感:

狄圣杰(小学六年级):

这是一个美丽的童话故事,是我读过的最好的童话。书中既没有“大灰狼残害小红帽”的镜头,也没有“杰克,打倒巨人”的惊天动地的大场面,有的只是小黑鱼的勇敢、团结的精神。

故事讲述了一条小黑鱼swimmy是如何在同伴们都被金枪鱼吃掉的情况下,潜入深海,机智地生存下来。最后遇到一群小鱼,它们团结一致,“组合”成了一条大鱼,在大海中所向披靡,再也没有什么鱼敢吃掉它们了。

小黑鱼生来就与众不同,其他鱼都是红色的,唯有它黑得像块焦炭,不仅如此,它的游泳速度也比其他的鱼要快,这也是它最终能逃离金枪鱼的原因。

小黑鱼不仅智力发达,还具有团结意识。要不是它,那些年幼的小红鱼们还龟缩在岩石缝里头不敢出来呢!俗话说:“人心齐,泰山移。”正是因为小红鱼们团结了起来,才使原本脆弱不堪的个体成了海洋中不可匹敌的超级“大鱼”。

这篇童话故事让我明白了一个道理:团结就是力量。这个故事将永远铭刻在我的心中。



在同学们交上自己的读后感后,吴老师对优秀作文进行了赏析,对个别同学在语法上的错误进行了纠正,并要求同学们在第一次的读后感基础上进行调整和升华,真正地提高写作水平。很多同学在原文的基础上做了较大的改变和提高,下面是部分同学优秀的读后感二稿:

 

胡双木:

Last week, I finished reading a fantastic picture book called “Swimmy”.It was about a fish named swimmy. He had a big family. He swam faster than his brothers and sisters. One day, a tuna fish swallowed his brothers and sisters, only swimmy escaped luckily. Then he swam away in the deep wet world. He saw many woonderful creatures. Afterwards, he saw a school of little fish, just like his own.They swam all together like the buiggest fish in the sea and they chased the big fish away. They lived happily.

This is a wonderful story. I think swimmy is brave and clever. The more important thing is that he is united. One stick is broken very easily, but many sticks are hardly broken. In other words, the more you unite, the more you’re powerful! You may be not clever, but you can’t be not brave. Please remember that unity is power!

 

杨濠旗:

Last week, I finished reading an exciting picture book called “Swimmy”. It was about a small intelligent fish named “swimmy” who had a big family. He was black. His brothers and sisters were all red. They swam more slowly than swimmy. One day a tuna fish swallowed all his brothers and sisters, only he escaped luckily and quickly. He swam from marvel to marvel and saw a school of gentle red fish. They swam all together like one giant fish and chased the big fish away.

How smart swimmy is! He grew in a dangerous world, but he was helpful and united. That’s why he could rebuild his life. So I think all the creatures in this world have a competition.Even competition has a danger all the time, but all the intelligent creatures will win happily because they are united. They will take great changes. But the giants sometimes can not win because they don’t unite. For example, a sperm whale is about 35 tons. If they don’t unite, they will walk to the death.. So we should get more and more united.

 

 


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