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优秀作文——高中精品班(初三/高一)作品欣赏Part1  

2011-07-18 08:24:00|  分类: 学生作品篇 |  标签: |举报 |字号 订阅

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       初升高班原09(1)班的英语学习在姚教授的带领下顺利展开,并且取得了很好的成绩。这个班里的学生大部分都考进了温岭中学尖子班和重点班,他们的学习态度非常端正,进取心很强,在学习过程中也付出了很多努力,因此英语水平也得到了大幅度的提高。下面是一些学生的优秀作文展示。

 

 

郭星汝       温岭中学高一(1)班

      Who is Braver,Man or Woman?

        People usually agree that a man is braver than a woman, so it’s certain that the former has to protect the latter. I don’t think so. In my opinion, anyone can be brave if he or she wants.

 According to the passage, it’s no doubt that the American naturalist was brave. He calmed down soon at the sight of a cobra and helped all people out of trouble. He was not only brave but also smart, wasn’t he?

 I also admire the hostess a lot. Can you imagine a cobra crawling across your foot but you’re still? I’m afraid most of your answers are “No”, and that’s why I think the hostess is really brave.

 We can’t say who’s braver rashly, but I hope everyone can learn from the braver. If you try your best, you will be the bravest, won’t you?

 

What Can We Learn From Thomas Jefferson?

 I’ve never known such a great man with many talents like Thomas Jefferson. Not only is he great, but also we can learn a lot from him.

 The very first thing I have learned is to do what I believe is right. In fact, I’m a girl who can hardly stick to anything because I don’t believe myself. But now I’ve changed. I think it’s wrong of me to follow others all the time or I’ll soon make out-and-out mistakes. Believing in myself, however, is the first step to success.

 Then I’m going to believe in the future which I could add beauty and hopes to. Thomas Jefferson was the man who never be hopeless and then he succeeded. We should also look forward to the future and try our best at the same time. If so, I’m sure we can succeed.

 There is too much that I can learn from Thomas Jefferson, therefore, I won’t stop learning and trying.

 

 

谢争        温岭中学高一(1)班

  Who is Braver, Man or Woman?

After learning, the essay left us an abstruse question: Who is braver, man or woman?

It’s very difficult to answer this question, because both of them solved the problem well. The man is brave, and the woman is calm. Who is braver?

In my opinion, I think the woman is braver. First, the woman is very brave. When the snake crawled across her foot, her behavior is amazing. She didn’t say anything instead of screaming. She only contracted her muscle slightly, how brave she is! If any other woman are in this situation, she will scream loudly. Second, she even let the native boy to prepare the bait for a snake. It is especially good! Not only was she not afraid of the cobra, but also she had the way to solve the problem. Although the man are also brave, but I think he isn’t so brave as the woman.

In a word, I think the woman is braver.

 

What can we learn from Thomas Jefferson?

As a good philosopher, Jefferson left people a rich legacy of ideas and examples. In many sides, we can be enlightened by his ideas, and we can learn from him.

First of all, we should judge for ourselves. We should think things carefully and then act on it. Others’ suggestions may be true, but they probably are wrong, too. We can’t be influenced by other people’s ideas. Judge for ourselves, and we will be close to success.

Second, we should learn from everyone. To improve our knowledge, it is necessary to learn from everyone. Everyone is adapt in at least one thing, but he can’t know everything. So you can see, learning is important.

Finally, we should do what we believe is right. “There are two sides to every question. If you take one side with decision and act on it with effect, those who take other side will of course resent your uctious.” How great these words are! Go alone your own way, and let others say!

You can see, we can learn much from Jefferson. Learn from Jefferson, and have the better life!   

 

 

周米雪       温岭中学高一(3)班

Lessons from Thomas Jefferson

 Thomas Jefferson, who wrote the Declaration of Independence, was a great man. And I have truly learned a lot from him.

I had always been  puzzled by others’ opinions on me. So I often felt really tired and upset. “Do what you believe is right.” A light broke in upon me. Yes, it’s right! Every coin has two sides, you are newer able to make all people pleased. I should give myself a reason that what I think is right, and then just act on it! We should learn to be confident enough.

“I expect the best, not the worst. I steer my ship with hope, leaving fear behind.” How optimistic and active Jefferson was! No one is able to predict what will happen in the future, but we can change and create it! We are young, we are lively, we have wisdom and strength! Trust the future; trust the young.

Though Jefferson died, his spirit will be remembered forever!

 

 

郑璐       温岭中学高一(3)班

Who is Braver, Man or Woman?

In my opinion, the woman is braver. And I have two reasons to support my opinion.

In the first place, while the cobra was crawling across the woman’s foot, she didn’t scream or cry. She motioned to the native boy standing behind her chair and whispered something to him instead. She decided to solve the problem by herself and didn’t tell others. She is very calm and smart, isn’t she?

In the second place, if the woman hadn’t asked the boy to place a bowl of milk on the veranda just outside the open doors as the bait for the cobra, the American naturalist wouldn’t have jumped to slam the veranda doors safely shut. And the naturalist didn’t realize that there was a cobra in the spacious dining room until he saw the woman’s reaction.

So, I think the young girl was right. As we can see, women are braver than men.

 

What Can We Learn From Thomas Jefferson?

Thomas Jefferson is a great man in history. I have learned a lot from him by reading <Lessons from Jefferson>.

Jefferson thought that we should judge for ourselves. “Neither believe nor reject anything ,” he wrote to his nephew, “because any other person has judged or believed it. Heaven has given you a mind for judging truth and error. Use it.” I was very much impressed by his words. In the past, I used to listen to others and accept their opinions without careful thought. And I believed that others were right. I did as what they told me but sometimes I still did wrong things. From now on, I will follow my own judgment. I won’t accept others’ ideas without thinking carefully. And I will try to judge for myself according to facts, then act on my own judgment.

Learning the lessons is important. However, I think doing it is more important. I will try my best to do what I wrote. I hope I can change a lot in the future.

 

 

潘俊杰       温岭中学高一(3)班

What I Can Learn From Thomas Jefferson

Thomas Jefferson, the third president of the US, lived more than 200 years ago. But his ideas are still especially interesting to modern youth. Here are some of the things I have learned from him.

The first thing, I have learnt from Jefferson is Go and See. Modern youth can obtain knowledge not only by reading books, but also from many other sources like going fishing. “Go and See” it also tells us that investigation is very important.

Another thing is you can learn from everyone. Everyone is different. People with different jobs and experience, have their personal advantages. So everyone is our teacher. From the waiter, we can learn how to get well with others. From the farmer, we can know what the “hardworking” means, and from servants……

And maybe the third thing is judge for yourself. And the fourth one is ……Oh, from Jefferson, there is much we can learn. That is always interesting and useful.

 

 

郑肃豪      温岭中学高一(5)班

  Who is Braver, Man or Woman?

People always say that men are braver than women. Because in their mind, men are the embodiment of power and women are the embodiment of weak. But is it true that men are braver than women? We can’t jump to the conclusions.

A woman’s first reaction in any crisis is to scream. So people think that women are not brave at all. It’s wrong! A man may feel frightened but he can try to control himself not to scream. But it doesn’t mean that he is brave enough. In my opinion, the real bravery means that while you are in danger, you can come up with a good idea to work out the problem with a cool mind. Whatever you are a man or a woman!

I heard an Indian story about a brave hostess. While a cobra was crawling across her feet, the hostess didn’t scream but motioned to the native boy and asked him to place a bowl of milk on the veranda just outside the open doors.. What a brave woman she was! So, please remember! Don’t jump to conclusions if men are braver than women. It depends on the brave performance!   

 

 

What can we learn from Thomas Jefferson?

Thomas Jefferson is the third President of the United States. He is not only famous as a president, he is also an expert in agriculture archeology and medicine. When he died, he left us a rich legacy of the ideas and examples about the life. So what can we learn from Thomas Jefferson?

In my opinion, Jefferson’s central idea is to be free. What is freedom? Is it just living without control? It’s not right. If a person is free, he should have freedom in his mind and never be chained to customs or other’s judgments. A free man should do what you believe is right and trust the future and the young because a free man always trusts himself. He never accepts other people’s opinions without careful thought and never changes his mind because of others’ opposition. And a  free man never gives up, so he usually steers his ship with hope, leaving fear behind. Life is always full of hope!

So were it left to me to decide whether I should be a bound man or a free man. I should not hesitate a moment to prefer the latter.

 

 

 江彬瑄         市三中初二(4)班 

                    这里要特别提一下江彬瑄同学,作为一个初二的学生,在初升高这个班级里表现优异,实属难得。

What Can We Learn From Thomas Jefferson?

Thomas Jefferson is remembered for many achievements in his public life.

I learnt a lot from Thomas Jefferson. For example, we need to go and see when we don’t know anything. Everyone has his advantages, so we could learn from everyone. And when you need to choose something important, you should judge for yourself. And now we should trust the future.

And I think the best lesson for me from Thomas Jefferson is to do what I believe is right. We must try to do the right thing we believe. After we did something wrong, we should listen to other’s advice and learn from it. But the most important is that we should do what we believe is right. Go your own way, let others talk.

That’s all I learnt from Thomas Jefferson. What about you?

 

 

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